International Weekly Miscellany - Volume 1, No. 6, August 5, 1850 by Various
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She sees him vanish into night--
She starts from sleep in deep affright, For it was not her own true knight. Though but in dream Gunhilda failed-- Though but a fancied ill assailed-- Though she but fancied fault bewailed-- Yet thought of day makes dream of night; She is not worthy of the knight; The inmost altar burns not bright. If loneliness thou canst not bear-- Cannot the dragon's venom dare-- Of the pure meed thou shouldst despair. Now sadder that lone maiden sighs; Far bitterer tears profane her eyes; Crushed in the dust her heart's flower lies.' "To show the evident carelessness with which this poem was constructed, I have italicized an identical rhyme (of about the same force in versification as an identical proposition in logic) and two grammatical improprieties. _To lean_ is a neuter verb, and 'seizing _on_' is not properly to be called a pleonasm, merely because it is--nothing at all. The concluding line is difficult of pronunciation through excess of consonants. I should have preferred, indeed, the ante-penultimate tristich as the _finale_ of the poem. "The supposition that the book of an author is a thing apart from the |
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