The Atlantic Monthly, Volume 09, No. 51, January, 1862 by Various
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commonplace morality, and bits of sentiment so long worn as to have lost
all their gloss. In general, his genius does not appear to advantage in dialogue. His characters have not always a due regard to the brevity of human life. They make long speeches, preach dull sermons, and ventilate very self-evident propositions with great solemnity of utterance. Their discourse wants not only compression, but seasoning. They are sometimes made to talk in such a way that the force of caricature can hardly go farther. For instance, in "The Pioneers," Judge Temple, coming into a room in his house, and seeing a fire of maple-logs, exclaims to Richard Jones, his kinsman and factotum,--"How often have I forbidden the use of the sugar-maple in my dwelling! The sight of that sap, as it _exudes_ with the heat, is painful to me, Richard." And in another place, he is made to say to his daughter,--"Remember the heats of July, my daughter; nor venture farther than thou canst _retrace before the meridian_." We may be sure that no man of woman born, in finding fault about the burning of maple-logs, ever talked of the sap's "exuding"; or, when giving a daughter a caution against walking too far, ever translated getting home before noon into "retracing before the meridian." This is almost as bad as Sir Piercie Shafton's calling the cows "the milky mothers of the herds." So, too, a lively perception of the ludicrous would have saved Cooper from certain peculiarities of phrase and awkwardnesses of expression, frequently occurring in his novels, such as might easily slip from the pen in the rapidity of composition, but which we wonder should have been overlooked in the proof-sheet. A few instances will illustrate our meaning. In the elaborate description of the personal charms of Cecilia Howard, in the tenth chapter of "The Pilot," we are told of "a small hand which _seemed to blush at its own naked beauties_." In "The Pioneers," speaking of the head and brow of Oliver Edwards, he says,--"The very air and manner with which _the member haughtily maintained itself_ over the |
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