Matthew Arnold by George Saintsbury
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odd, unnatural, paradoxical. Except for the "poetic diction" of
putting "Goddess" after "Circe" instead of before it, the first stave is merely a prose sentence, of strictly prosaic though not inharmonious rhythm. But in this stave there is no instance of the strangest peculiarity, and what seems to some the worst fault of the piece, the profusion of broken-up decasyllables, which sometimes suggest a very "corrupt" manuscript, or a passage of that singular stuff in the Caroline dramatists which is neither blank verse, nor any other, nor prose. Here are a few out of many instances-- "Is it, then, evening So soon? [_I see the night-dews Clustered in thick beads_], dim," etc. * * * ["_When the white dawn first Through the rough fir-planks. _"] * * * ["_Thanks, gracious One! Ah! the sweet fumes again._"] * * * ["_They see the Centaurs In the upper glens._"] One could treble these--indeed in one instance (the sketch of the Indian) the entire stanza of _eleven_ lines, by the insertion of one "and" only, becomes a smooth blank-verse piece of _seven_, two of which are indeed hemistichs, and three "weak-ended," |
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