Writing for Vaudeville by Brett Page
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Therefore, in selecting material the monologue writer should choose those gags and points that can be told in pictures, and every word he uses should be a picture-word. 5. Smoothness and Blending A monologue--like the thin-model watch mentioned--is made up of many parts. Each part fits into, the other--one gag or point blends perfectly into the following one--so that the entire monologue seems not a combination of many different parts, but a smoothly working, unified whole. Count the number of different points there are in "The German Senator" and note how each seemingly depends on the one before it and runs into the one following; you will then see what is meant by blending. Then read the monologue again, this time without the Panama Canal point--plainly marked for this exposition--and you will see how one part can be taken away and still leave a smoothly reading and working whole. It is to careful blending that the monologue owes its smoothness. The ideal for which the writer should strive is so to blend his gags and points that, by the use of not more than one short sentence, he relates one gag or point to the next with a naturalness and inevitableness that make the whole perfectly smooth. We are now, I think, in a position to sum up the theory of the monologue. The pure vaudeville monologue, which was defined as a |
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