Society for Pure English, Tract 11 - Three Articles on Metaphor by Society for Pure English
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wheat_, 'sift' is a live metaphor; in _the sifting of evidence_, the
metaphor is so familiar that it is about equal chances whether _sifting_ or _examination_ will be used, and a sieve is not present to the thought--unless, indeed, some one conjures it up by saying _All the evidence must first be sifted with acid tests_, or _with the microscope_; under such a stimulus our metaphor turns out to have been not dead, but dormant. The other word, _examine_, will do well enough as an example of the real stone-dead metaphor; the Latin _examino_, being from _examen_ the tongue of a balance, meant originally to weigh; but, though weighing is not done with acid tests or microscopes any more than sifting, _examine_ gives no convulsive twitchings, like _sift_, at finding itself in their company; _examine_, then, is dead metaphor, and _sift_ only half dead, or three-quarters. 2. Some pitfalls. A, Unsustained Metaphor; B, Overdone Metaphor; C, Spoilt Metaphor; D, Battles of the Dead; E, Mixed Metaphor. A. Unsustained Metaphor _He was still in the middle of those twenty years of neglect which only began to lift in 1868_. The plunge into metaphor at _lift_, which presupposes a mist, is too sudden after the literal _twenty years of neglect_; years, even gloomy years, do not lift. _The means of education at the disposal of the Protestants and Presbyterians of the North were stunted and sterilized._ 'The means at disposal' names something too little vegetable or animal to consort with the metaphorical verbs. Education (personified) may be stunted, but means may not. |
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