Letters Concerning Poetical Translations - And Virgil's and Milton's Arts of Verse, &c. by William Benson
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"Their jolly Notes they _chanted_ loud and clear,
And horrid Helms high on their Heads they _bear_. This is much more lively and peinturesque than if he had writ _bore_, and you will easily perceive it. It may be said, perhaps, that _Fairfax_ used _bear_ here for the sake of the Verse; let that be allow'd, but then it must be likewise granted, that _Virgil_ uses _vindicat_ instead of _vindicavit_, for the sake of his Verse, which he would not have done, if it had not been more beautiful than the common Prose way of writing: And as it is an Excellency in _Virgil_, so it is in _Fairfax_. LETTER VII. _SIR,_ I am now to collect the Passages of the _Æneid_, mentioned in my former Letters, and bring them together with the _rhym'd_ and _blank_ Verse Translations. The first Passage is this (not to take notice of the very first Lines, which Mr. _Pit_ has translated in two different manners) "_Sic cunctus pelagi cecidit fragor, æquora postquam Prospiciens genitor, coeloque invectus aperto Flectit equos, curruque volans dat lora secundo._ |
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