Writing for Vaudeville by Brett Page
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paraphrased thus:
[1] English Composition, page 165. Have as many cards or slips of paper as you have points or gags. Write only one point or gag on one card or slip of paper. On the first card write "Introduction," and always keep that card first in your hand. Then take up a card and read the point or gag on it as following the introduction, the second card as the second point or gag, and so on until you have arranged your monologue in an effective routine. Then try another arrangement. Let us say the tenth joke in the first routine reads better as the first joke. All right, place it in your new arrangement right after the introduction. Perhaps the fourteenth point or gag fits in well after the tenth gag--fine, make that fourteenth gag the second gag; and so on through your cards until you have arranged a new routine. Your first arrangement can invariably be improved--maybe even your seventh arrangement can be made better; very good, by shuffiing the cards you may make as many arrangements as you wish and eventually arrive at the ideal routine. And by keeping a memorandum of preceding arrangements you can always turn back to the older routine--if that appears the best after all other arrangements have been tried. But what is really the ideal arrangement of a monologue? How may you know which routine is really the best? Frankly, you cannot _know_ until it has been tried out on an audience many, many |
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